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Good effort on making the TV box to show an example of their idea which shows enthusiasm for the project.
Timeline seems pretty accurate and shows they know exactly what they're talking about and what they want to get done.
It's good how all the written points are illustrated with video footage and pictures.
It would be useful if there was some description as to how you came to the idea for the final video and video's of the band to show their general style of video and how yours possibly relates.

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